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Antonio Castellaneta's avatar

There is something honest in the refusal to make the moment larger than it is. Not forever. Not destiny. Just the exact interval in which judgment loses its authority and presence becomes enough.

UpsilonA's avatar

"the bass shoves forward

I follow badly

splattering confidence"

I love this line. it's awkward, human

AliceMae's avatar

Eira lovies I thinks thy are sipping something marvelously seductive tempting trying but not too hard mostly intriguing beguiling

I do enjoy your verses!